Thank you for pointing these out! There are a few other examples that come to mind of this same issue. When you save Bastilla on Taris there is an instance where you declare that you could handle the Black Vulkars on you own and Bastilla replies "Yes, I'm sure you can". I think the player response originally was along the lines of "I can take care of myself". That makes more sense. Another example that comes to mind is when you tell your party to step back when HK-47 starts to remember his past. His response is "that wont be necessary" but the new dialogue doesn't make HK-47's response as fluid. These would help make any update you are considering even better!
I just downloaded and played this mod moments ago. I can't thank you enough! My dreams of having this rather secret cut ending play out to such an incredible animation at the end, complete with credits and a comprehensive sequence of cutscenes, is a dream come true. I literally jumped out of my chair with my hands in the air that's how floored I was at this ending. I don't think BioWare could have done better if they tried all those years ago. Thank you, thank you, thank you!