I'd love to help out. Not sure how good I am at writing original content, but I'd be willing to give it a go. However, I'm a pretty good editor when looking for grammar errors/typos and other such fixes, if you need that kind of help, I'd be really happy to help.
For example, the screenshot here would probably sound better if it was written something like:
"My apologies. You fought in the battle of Telos IV alongside my father during the Jedi Civil War. He often told the story of how Revan and Malak bombed the planet when they turned on the Republic."
Or something along those lines. The repetition of "my father" seems to be redundant, and the entire line seems to be rather disjointed, using multiple sentences to express ideas that would be better suited to be in a single sentence.