LiliArch

A little tip: After you've written one out, say the dialogue out loud. If it sounds awkward to someone else, you'll have a good place to start editing.

Good point. Unfortunately, I don't have enough english-speakers around me, but I guess I can start worrying about it when I get that far. (Though I meant that writing feels good, not necessarily that the actual dialogue feels good, but it doesn't mean I wouldn't want it to sound good also. I don't want the work to scream "I am a mod" too loudly.)