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  1. 1 point
    Thor110
    Much more settled on a direction for the project now, latest story descriptions can be found in my latest post on page 4 of my WIP topic, much more realistic than some of the outlandish ideas I had to begin with.
  2. 1 point
    losemi
    might I suggest a change in dialogue between atris and Brianna's sisters, the one in telos academy where atris tells Brianna to go with the exile and tells her that it must be kept a secret even from her sister and then in the very next scene she reveals that secret to her sister. it was a glaring contradiction so I think the vanilla dialogue where she tells them she doesn't know why she left would have been better.
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    Mandalore
    Holy crap this place has changed its looks since last I came here.