that was real good, i saw a few gramatical errors, but they not really noticable, and i cant complain, because i dont put alot of effort into my writing(as u can see)
as for your next journal, im not familar with all the battles that the mandalorians were in, but if i went through kotor 1 again, and did all of canderous speakings, then i would find out more about the different battles good luk finding another battle to write about
edit* maybe u could write about the advaned tactcial training?