Hello!
I have tweaked slightly this cutscene as well. As before, I uploaded a video showing the most relevant change, namely a different behavior of the two thugs after Jagi's suicide. In the original game what would happen is that they turn hostile and just stay there doing nothing until the party would get closer to engage them: quite unsatisfactory. In my tweaked version, the two thugs would just check on Jagi then leave for Anchorhead instead. Among the other things: I have used dialogue animations for Jagi and Canderous at appropriate time, fixed wrong facing, corrected a text bug ("you point" -> "your point"), added the "[Success]" which was missing in two lines following successful persuasion attempts and made the cutscene unskippable.
It would be nice to have Jagi undergo the ebmar's treatment and become a unique looking, legendary character, by the way!
Cheers!