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I watched their abridged series and greatly enjoyed it, so I'll check yours out. 

 

 

Love the new signature BTW :D  ....what is it you do again?... ;)

Please let me know what you think :w00t: .

 

Well I'm in high-school, but in my free time I record videos, edit them and upload them on YouTube, and I just got this Partnership with ZoomingTV ( from February, I think, but the money came like 3 months later ), and since that day I'm paid for what I upload :ice: .

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Too much dialogue. Childish all-in-your-face jokes with no subtlety. A clever parody shouldn't have a single sex joke.

 

"Brevity is the soul of wit" (Shakespeare) 

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Too much dialogue. Childish all-in-your-face jokes with no subtlety. A clever parody shouldn't have a single sex joke.

 

"Brevity is the soul of wit" (Shakespeare) 

The game itself has A LOT of dialogue, so the abridged will too have pretty long dialogues ( not as much as the game though ).

 

Well alright, try to make an abridged series and let's see which one's better, ok? No seriously, constructive criticism is fine, but I can't see it in your comment! No offence!

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