I think we have a couple of good storywriters on Deadly Stream to rewrite that piece. It is quite apparent that it's not written by anyone professional, the player's lines are way too long for so many of them to appear in one scene.
Also, I hope the plot you come out with to restore would tie well enough with the rest of the game. I like the idea of restoring the GenoHaradan, but I consider the G0-T0 plot very good already and I hope this won't get spoiled by getting too much of the content on Nar Shaddaa while most of the game has little sidequests and short stories (save Telos, this was a time-consuming yet well-written part of the game).
One more question: which head did you finally choose to use for Dessicus?