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might I suggest a change in dialogue between atris and Brianna's sisters, the one in telos academy where atris tells Brianna to go with the exile and tells her that it must be kept a secret even from her sister and then in the very next scene she reveals that secret to her sister. it was a glaring contradiction so I think the vanilla dialogue where she tells them she doesn't know why she left would have been better.