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#1 zbyl2

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Posted 02 April 2012 - 01:04 PM

EDITED: check out this post.


Title says it all... there are some lines in need of translating into Spanish, French, Italian and German for TSLRCM 1.8. Mostly related to HK Factory. If you speak any of these languages - help us and translate, and your name shall be forever listed in TSLRCM's credits! :)

Click on "show" to see them.


Also, a note to all non-English player - if you played a game with non-English TSLRCM, yet you found English text anywhere in the game, now is the best time to talk about it. I know some lines were left untranslated; Spanish version had English Kaevee's dialog for example - it's one of issues fixed for 1.8. So, yeah... we are trying to give you best experience possible, no matter what language you speak.

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Posted 03 April 2012 - 01:28 AM

Hey from germany,

I have been watching this forum for a long period of time and I'd love to do something to help complete TSLRCM 1.8 - and to bring this great project to it's happy end. So, by the way, thank you very much for working this hard and spending so much of your spare time on this to make other people enjoy this game more!
However, this would be my translation of the stated lines into german:

103PER/drocon.dlg
Access Log 253-14: Sonic Imprint Sensor Update
-> Zugriffsprotokoll 253-14: Aktualisierung des Schalldrucksensors
(is the thing you find at peragus to imitate the voice of the maintenance officer and that allows the maincharacter to understand foreign languages for the rest of the game called "Sonic Imprint Sensor" in english? Then my translation is correct. In the german version of the game this thing is called "Schalldrucksensor".)

403DXN/kelborn.dlg
Bao-Dur has the skills needed for this task.
-> Bao-Dur verfügt über die nötigen Fähigkeiten für diese Aufgabe.

902MAL/deadassassin.dlg
[Judging from the number and depth of the blaster burns, these Sith appear to have been recently killed by fire from a heavy repeater rifle.]
-> Der Anzahl und der Schwere der Wunden dieses Sith zufolge wurde er erst kürzlich durch die Salve eines schweren Repetierblaster getötet.




Journal:
You have stopped production of the HK-50 model. The factory terminal should allow you to shut down the factory.
-> Du hast die Produktion der HK-50 gestoppt. Es sollte dir nun möglich sein, die Fabrik über das Fabrikterminal abzuschalten.

You have stopped production of the HK-50 model.
With the HK-50s offline, you can now start mass production of the HK-51 model.
-> Du hast die Produktion der HK-50 gestoppt.
Da die HK-50 nun offline sind, kannst du die Massenproduktion der HK-51 starten.

You removed your behavior core from the HK-51s.
-> Du hast deinen Verhaltenskern aus den HK-51 entfernt.

Unwilling or unable to discover the name of the great Gand warrior you decided to lie in order to claim your reward instead.
-> Unwillig oder außerstande den Namen des großen Gand-Kriegers zu enthüllen, entschließt du dich zu lügen, um deine Belohnung zu erhalten.


298/hk50shot.dlg
Statement: Assassination protocols activated.
-> Aussage: Tötungsprotokolle initialisiert.

298/reactort.dlg
If you could find a way to erase this from your memory, you would be able to bypass this restriction.
-> Wenn du einen Weg finden könntest, das aus deinem Speicher zu löschen, wärst du in der Lage, die Beschränkung zu umgehen.
(I assumed that it's a droid's memory that has to be erased from "this". If it's a human being, than it would be: Wenn du einen Weg finden könntest, dies zu vergessen, (...))

298/datapadhkcore.uti
Core Upload Console
-> Kernaktualisierungskonsole

This portable console can be used to upload modified behavior cores into some HK models.
-> Diese tragbare Konsole kann genutzt werden, um modifizierte Verhaltenskerne in einige HK-Modelle hochzuladen.

This particular console is designed to work with only generation 51 HK units.
-> Diese spezielle Konsole kann nur mit HK-51-Einheiten genutzt werden.
("This particular console is designed to work only with HK units of the 51th generation."?
-> Diese spezielle Konsole kann nur für HK-Einheiten der 51er-Generation genutzt werden.)

298/hk50corein.dlg
[Shutting down the factory is impossible with the HK-50 core installed.]
-> [Die Abschaltung der Fabrik ist unmöglich, solange der HK-50-Kern installiert ist.]

[Remove the core and shut down the factory. Assimilation is not an option.]
-> [Entferne den Kern und schalte die Fabrik ab. Verschmelzung ist keine Option.]


298/hk50term.dlg
DELETING...
BEHAVIOR CORE TEMPLATE
REMOVED
-> LÖSCHE...
VERHALTENSKERNMUSTER
GELÖSCHT



TERMINATING PRODUCTION WILL
DISABLE ANY FURTHER STATION COMMANDS
-> ABSCHALTUNG DER PRODUKTION WIRD
ALLE WEITEREN BEFEHLE DER STATION DEAKTIVIEREN

CONTINUE?
-> WEITER?



Continue.
-> Weiter.



NO PRIMARY PRODUCTION LINE FOUND
-> KEINE PRIMÄRE PRODUKTIONSSTRASSE GEFUNDEN

MODEL PRODUCTION:
HK-51
STATUS: ACTIVE
-> PRODUKTION:
HK-51
STATUS: AKTIV

ALL UNITS ONLINE
-> ALLE EINHEITEN ONLINE



NO PRIMARY PRODUCTION LINE FOUND
-> KEINE PRIMÄRE PRODUKTIONSSTRASSE GEFUNDEN

NO BACKUP PRODUCTION LINE FOUND
-> KEINE RESERVEPRODUKTIONSSTRASSE GEFUNDEN



299/hk51corein.dlg
[Shutting down the factory is impossible with your behavior core in the HK-51s.]
-> [Die Abschaltung der Fabrik ist unmöglich, solang sich dein Verhaltenskern in den HK-51 befindet.]

[However, it might be beneficial to mass produce this highly effective HK model.]
-> [Dennoch, es könnte es vorteilhaft sein, die Massenproduktion dieses hocheffizienten HK-Modells zu starten.]

299/hk51term.dlg
Remove HK-47 behavior core template.
-> Entferne HK-47-Verhaltenskernmuster.

The HK-51 behavior cores cannot be modified once units are active.
-> it depends: are the HK-51 already active?
Yes: Nun, da die HK 51 bereits aktiviert sind, können ihre Verhaltenskerne nicht mehr modifiziert werden.
No: Sobald die HK-51 aktiviert sind, können ihre Verhaltenskerne nicht mehr modifiziert werden.

HK-51 SCHEMATICS:
COMBAT UPGRADES
BEHAVIOR CORE TEMPLATE
-> HK-51 SCHALTPLÄNE:
KAMPFUPGRADES
VERHALTENSKERNMUSTER

ERROR:
UNABLE TO LINK WITH UNITS
-> FEHLER:
VERBINDUNG MIT EINHEITEN NICHT MÖGLICH

ACCESSING...
BEHAVIOR CORE TEMPLATE
REMOVED FROM ALL UNITS
-> ZUGRIFF...
VERHALTENSKERNMUSTER
AUS ALLEN EINHEITEN ENTFERNT


299/sec_term.dlg
To shut down the factory, you must first terminate the active production lines for each active droid model.
-> Um die Fabrik als ganzes abzuschalten zu können, musst du zunächst jede aktive Produktionsstraße jedes aktiven Droidenmodells abschalten.

Each production line must be shut down manually from its manufacturing terminal.
-> Jede einzelne Produktionstraße muss manuell von dem sie steuernden Terminal aus abgeschaltet werden.

In addition, when the primary line is shut down, any secondary line units will be activated automatically.
-> Wird die primäre Produktionsstraße abgeschaltet, werden alle Einheiten der sekundäre Produktionsstraße automatisch aktiviert.
(this is only correct if "line" means "production line")

Commission HK-51 backup production.
-> Leite HK-51-Reserveproduktion ein.

PUSHING SECONDARY LINE INTO PRODUCTION
-> STARTE SEKUNDÄRE PRODUKTIONSSTRASSE

PRODUCTION CANNOT BE STARTED
PRIMARY PRODUCTION LINE STILL ACTIVE
DEACTIVATE TO CONTINUE
-> PRODUKTION KANN NICHT GESTARTET WERDEN
PRIMÄRE PRODUKTIONSSTRASSE IST NOCH AKTIV
DEAKTIVIEREN UM FORTZUFAHREN


299/sec_terminal.utp
Factory Terminal
-> Fabrikterminal



I only finished the vanilla version of TSL. So I don't know anything about untranslated lines in the german version of TSLRCM 1.7. Sorry about that.

#3 Hib

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Posted 03 April 2012 - 08:28 AM

902MAL/deadassassin.dlg
[Judging from the number and depth of the blaster burns, these Sith appear to have been recently killed by fire from a heavy repeater rifle.]
-> Der Anzahl und der Schwere der Wunden dieses Sith zufolge wurde er erst kürzlich durch die Salve eines schweren Repetierblaster getötet.
Besser: Die Anzahl und die Schwere dieser Wunden weisen darauf hin, dass dieser Sith erst kürzlich durch die Salve eines schweren Repetierblasters getötet wurde.


299/hk51corein.dlg
[Shutting down the factory is impossible with your behavior core in the HK-51s.]
-> [Die Abschaltung der Fabrik ist unmöglich, solange sich dein Verhaltenskern in den HK-51 befindet.]

[However, it might be beneficial to mass produce this highly effective HK model.]
-> [Dennoch, es könnte es vorteilhaft sein, die Massenproduktion dieses hocheffizienten HK-Modells zu starten.]
Entweder: Dennoch, es könnte vorteilhaft sein, die Massenproduktion dieses hocheffizienten HK-Modells zu starten.
Oder: Dennoch könnte es vorteilhaft sein, die Massenproduktion dieses hocheffizienten HK-Modells zu starten.



299/sec_term.dlg
To shut down the factory, you must first terminate the active production lines for each active droid model.
-> Um die Fabrik als Ganzes abzuschalten zu können, musst du zunächst jede aktive Produktionsstraße jedes aktiven Droidenmodells abschalten.
Oder: Um die Fabrik stillzulegen, musst du zunächst jede aktive Produktionsstraße jedes aktiven Droidenmodells abschalten.

Otherwise a good translation.
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Ansonsten ist die Übersetzung gut gelungen.

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Posted 03 April 2012 - 10:31 AM

deine Übersetzung gefällt mir besser :P

To shut down the factory, you must first terminate the active production lines for each active droid model.
-> Um die Fabrik stillzulegen, musst du zunächst jede aktive Produktionsstraße jedes aktiven Droidenmodells abschalten.


"Um die Fabrik stillzulegen, musst du zunächst die aktive Produktionsstraße jedes aktiven Droidenmodells abschalten." ?

#5 dashrendar

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Posted 05 April 2012 - 05:25 AM

From Costa Rica.
I'm very glad to help with this project.
All of you guys are doing a great job!!!



103PER/drocon.dlg
Access Log 253-14: Sonic Imprint Sensor Update
=Acceso de inicio de sesión 253-14: Actualización de sensor de huella sónica

403DXN/kelborn.dlg
Bao-Dur has the skills needed for this task.
=Bao-Dur tiene las habilidades necesarias para esta tarea.

902MAL/deadassassin.dlg
[Judging from the number and depth of the blaster burns, these Sith appear to have been recently killed by fire from a heavy repeater rifle.]
=[A juzgar por el número y la profundidad de las quemaduras de Blaster, estos Sith parecen haber sido recientemente asesinados por los disparos de un rifle repetidor pesado.]


Journal:
You have stopped production of the HK-50 model. The factory terminal should allow you to shut down the factory.
=Bitácora:
Se ha detenido la producción del modelo HK-50. El terminal de la fábrica debería permitirle apagar la fábrica.


You have stopped production of the HK-50 model.
With the HK-50s offline, you can now start mass production of the HK-51 model.
=Se ha detenido la producción del modelo HK-50.
Con los HK-50 fuera de línea, usted puede ahora comenzar la producción en masa del modelo HK-51.


You removed your behavior core from the HK-51s.
=Ha retirado su núcleo de comportamiento de los HK-51.


Unwilling or unable to discover the name of the great Gand warrior you decided to lie in order to claim your reward instead.
=Reacio o incapaz de descubrir el nombre del gran guerrero Gand, ha decidido mentir, con el fin de reclamar el premio en su lugar.



298/hk50shot.dlg
Statement: Assassination protocols activated.
=Afirmación: protocolos de asesino activados.


298/reactort.dlg
If you could find a way to erase this from your memory, you would be able to bypass this restriction.
=Si pudiera encontrar una forma de borrar esto de su memoria, sería capaz de eludir esta restricción.


298/datapadhkcore.uti
Core Upload Console
=Consola de carga de núcleo

This portable console can be used to upload modified behavior cores into some HK models.
=Esta consola portátil puede ser utilizada para cargar núcleos de comportamiento modificados en algunos modelos HK.


This particular console is designed to work with only generation 51 HK units.
=Esta consola en particular está diseñada para funcionar sólo con la generación de unidades HK 51.


298/hk50corein.dlg
[Shutting down the factory is impossible with the HK-50 core installed.]
=[Apagar la fábrica es imposible con el núcleo de HK-50 instalado.]

[Remove the core and shut down the factory. Assimilation is not an option.]
=[Remueva el núcleo y apague la fábrica. La asimilación no es una opción.]

298/hk50term.dlg
DELETING...
BEHAVIOR CORE TEMPLATE
REMOVED
=BORRANDO...
PLANTILLA DE NÚCLEO DE COMPORTAMIENTO
REMOVIDO


TERMINATING PRODUCTION WILL
DISABLE ANY FURTHER STATION COMMANDS
=TERMINAR LA PRODUCCIÓN
DESACTIVARA CUALQUIER COMANDO DE LA ESTACIÓN

CONTINUE?
=CONTINUAR?


Continue.
=Continuar.


NO PRIMARY PRODUCTION LINE FOUND
=LÍNEA DE PRODUCCIÓN PRIMARIA NO ENCONTRADA


MODEL PRODUCTION:
HK-51
STATUS: ACTIVE
=MODELO DE PRODUCCIÓN:
HK 51
ESTADO: ACTIVO


ALL UNITS ONLINE
=TODAS LAS UNIDADES EN LÍNEA


NO PRIMARY PRODUCTION LINE FOUND
=LÍNEA DE PRODUCCIÓN PRIMARIA NO ENCONTRADA

NO BACKUP PRODUCTION LINE FOUND
=LÍNEA DE PRODUCCIÓN DE RESPALDO NO ENCONTRADA



299/hk51corein.dlg
[Shutting down the factory is impossible with your behavior core in the HK-51s.]
=[Apagar la fábrica es imposible con el núcleo de comportamiento en los HK-51.]


[However, it might be beneficial to mass produce this highly effective HK model.]
=[Sin embargo, puede ser beneficioso producir en masa este modelo HK altamente efectivo.]


299/hk51term.dlg
Remove HK-47 behavior core template.
=Remueva la plantilla de núcleo de comportamiento de HK-47

The HK-51 behavior cores cannot be modified once units are active.
=Los núcleos de comportamiento de HK-51 no pueden ser modificados una vez que las unidades estan activas.

HK-51 SCHEMATICS:
COMBAT UPGRADES
BEHAVIOR CORE TEMPLATE
=ESQUEMAS DE HK-51:
MEJORAS DE COMBATE
PLANTILLA DE NÚCLEO DE COMPORTAMIENTO

ERROR:
UNABLE TO LINK WITH UNITS
=ERROR: (same word, different pronunciation)
INCAPAZ DE ENLAZAR CON UNIDADES

ACCESSING...
BEHAVIOR CORE TEMPLATE
REMOVED FROM ALL UNITS
=ACCESANDO...
PLANTILLA DE NÚCLEO DE COMPORTAMIENTO
REMOVIDA DE TODAS LAS UNIDADES


299/sec_term.dlg
To shut down the factory, you must first terminate the active production lines for each active droid model.
=Para apagar la fábrica, primero debe terminar las líneas de producción activas por cada modelo de droide activo.


Each production line must be shut down manually from its manufacturing terminal.
=Cada línea de producción se debe de apagar manualmente desde su terminal de fabricación.


In addition, when the primary line is shut down, any secondary line units will be activated automatically.
=Además, cuando la línea primaria es apagada, cualquiera de las unidades de la línea secundaria se activarán automáticamente.



Commission HK-51 backup production.
=Comisionando producción de respaldo de HK-51.


PUSHING SECONDARY LINE INTO PRODUCTION
=FORZANDO LÍNEA SECUNDARIA EN PRODUCCIÓN


PRODUCTION CANNOT BE STARTED
PRIMARY PRODUCTION LINE STILL ACTIVE
DEACTIVATE TO CONTINUE
=LA PRODUCCIÓN NO PUEDE EMPEZAR
LA LÍNEA DE PRODUCCIÓN PRIMARIA SIGUE ACTIVA
DESACTIVAR PARA CONTINUAR


299/sec_terminal.utp
Factory Terminal
=Terminal de la Fábrica

#6 Salk

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Posted 05 April 2012 - 05:56 AM

ITALIAN

103PER/drocon.dlg
Annotazione del diario 253-14: Aggiornamento del Sensore di Traccia Sonica


403DXN/kelborn.dlg
Bao-Dur ha la competenza necessaria per questa mansione.


902MAL/deadassassin.dlg
[A giudicare dal numero e dalla profondità delle bruciature, questi Sith sembrerebbero essere stati uccisi di recente dal fuoco di un fucile ripetitore pesante.]





Diario:
Hai interrotto la produzione del modello HK-50. Il terminale industriale dovrebbe permetterti di cessare l'attività della fabbrica.

Hai interrotto la produzione del modello HK-50.
Con gli HK-50 fuori dai giochi, puoi ora dare il via alla produzione di massa del modello HK-51.

Hai rimosso il tuo codice comportamentale dagli HK-51.

Non volendo o non potendo scoprire il nome del grande guerriero Gand, hai deciso di mentire per ricevere comunque la tua ricompensa.


298/hk50shot.dlg
Asserzione: Protocolli per assassinio attivati.

298/reactort.dlg
Se riuscissi a trovare un modo per cancellarla dalla memoria, saresti in grado di aggirare questa restrizione.

298/datapadhkcore.uti
Console per il caricamento del codice

Questa console portatile può essere usata per inserire codici comportamentali modificati nei modelli HK.

Questa specifica console è disegnata per operare unicamente con unità HK di cinquantunesima generazione.

298/hk50corein.dlg
[E' impossibile cessare l'attività della fabbrica con il nucleo HK-50 installato.]

[Rimuovere il nucleo e cessare l'attività della fabbrica. L'assimilazione non è contemplata.]


298/hk50term.dlg
CANCELLAZIONE IN CORSO...
MODELLO DI CODICE COMPORTAMENTALE
RIMOSSO


LA CESSAZIONE DELL'ATTIVITA' PRODUTTIVA
DISABILITERA' OGNI ULTERIORE COMANDO DELLA STAZIONE

CONTINUARE?



Continua.



NESSUNA LINEA PRINCIPALE DI PRODUZIONE TROVATA

MODELLO IN PRODUZIONE:
HK-51
STATO: ATTIVO

TUTTE LE UNITA' IN LINEA



NESSUNA LINEA PRINCIPALE DI PRODUZIONE TROVATA

NESSUNA LINEA DI PRODUZIONE DI RISERVA TROVATA



299/hk51corein.dlg
[Cessare l'attività della fabbrica è impossibile con il tuo codice comportamentale dentro gli HK-51.]

[Tuttavia, potrebbe essere di beneficio per la produzione di massa di questi modelli HK ad alta efficienza.]

299/hk51term.dlg
Rimuovere il modello HK-47 di codice comportamentale.

I codici comportamentali dell'HK-51 non possono essere modificati una volta che le unità sono attivate.

SCHEMI DELL'HK-51:
POTENZIAMENTI DEL COMBATTIMENTO
MODELLO CODICE COMPORTAMENTALE

ERRORE:
IMPOSSIBILE COLLEGARSI CON LE UNITA'

ACCESSO IN CORSO...
MODELLO CODICE COMPORTAMENTALE
RIMOSSO DA TUTTE LE UNITA'


299/sec_term.dlg
Per cessare l'attività della fabbrica, devi prima disattivare le linee di produzione di ogni modello operativo di droide.

Ogni linea di produzione deve essere interrotta manualmente usando il relativo terminale industriale.

Inoltre, quando la linea principale è disattivata, tutte le unità della linea secondaria saranno automaticamente attivate.

Commissione per la produzione di HK-51 di riserva.

AVVIAMENTO DELLA PRODUZIONE DELLA LINEA SECONDARIA IN CORSO

LA PRODUZIONE NON PUO' ESSERE INIZIATA
LINEA DI PRODUZIONE PRINCIPALE ANCORA ATTIVA
DISATTIVARE PER PROCEDERE


299/sec_terminal.utp
Terminale Industriale

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Posted 05 April 2012 - 07:54 AM

deine Übersetzung gefällt mir besser :P



"Um die Fabrik stillzulegen, musst du zunächst die aktive Produktionsstraße jedes aktiven Droidenmodells abschalten." ?

Klingt besser, da eine Wortwiederholung vermieden wird.

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Posted 05 April 2012 - 11:45 AM

Nice job guys! Thanks for your help.
Now we only need French...

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Posted 05 April 2012 - 11:54 AM

Isn't ttlan (I think that was his name) still around? I remember his final run through 1.7 topic to help catch little bugs and the like. Wasn't he playing a french version?

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Posted 05 April 2012 - 12:20 PM

Yup, but seems he kind of goes on and off for a while.

Can't be sure he's back before release... :/

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Posted 05 April 2012 - 04:30 PM

The italian one is very good, except for a few little mistakes


ITALIAN

103PER/drocon.dlg
Annotazione del diario 253-14: Aggiornamento del Sensore di Traccia Sonica


It's not "Sonica" but "Sonora"



ITALIAN

Asserzione: Protocolli per assassinio attivati.


It's best "Asserzione: Protocolli di assassinio attivati."


ITALIAN

Hai rimosso il tuo codice comportamentale dagli HK-51.


Here and in all the others listed below "Nucleo" (Translation for "core") must be written instead of "codice" (translation for "Code")
If the original says "Cores" Then it's "Nuclei"

ITALIAN
298/datapadhkcore.uti
Console per il caricamento del codice

Questa console portatile può essere usata per inserire codici comportamentali modificati nei modelli HK.

CANCELLAZIONE IN CORSO...
MODELLO DI CODICE COMPORTAMENTALE
RIMOSSO

299/hk51corein.dlg
[Cessare l'attività della fabbrica è impossibile con il tuo codice comportamentale dentro gli HK-51.]

299/hk51term.dlg
Rimuovere il modello HK-47 di codice comportamentale.

I codici comportamentali dell'HK-51 non possono essere modificati una volta che le unità sono attivate.

SCHEMI DELL'HK-51:
POTENZIAMENTI DEL COMBATTIMENTO
MODELLO CODICE COMPORTAMENTALE

ERRORE:
IMPOSSIBILE COLLEGARSI CON LE UNITA'

ACCESSO IN CORSO...
MODELLO CODICE COMPORTAMENTALE
RIMOSSO DA TUTTE LE UNITA'



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Posted 05 April 2012 - 04:39 PM

I practically disagree with all the remarks made by Cair, whom I thank anyway for thinking the translation was well done.

In the specifics, I took freedom of translating "core" non-literally in most cases while twice have I decided to propose a literal translation. This was because the italian equivalent using a literal translation would not make any real sense except for in those two particular lines.

I guess it's up to a third party to decide whether or not Cair's corrections are... needed. I stand by my original translation in every respect.

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Posted 05 April 2012 - 04:44 PM

Well, I don't speak Italian at all, so I don't know what to do :hot: Any other Italian-speaker can vote whether Cair's corrections should be included or if I should stick with Salk's?

Would be so much easier if you agreed... oh well.

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Posted 05 April 2012 - 08:39 PM

Hello, I've been following your great work on this project for a while, but it is the first time I post on this forum, being able to help for once, I hope, with the French translation:

103PER/drocon.dlg
Access Log 253-14: Sonic Imprint Sensor Update
->Accès au Journal (not completely sure) 253-14: Mise à jour du Capteur Sonique


403DXN/kelborn.dlg
Bao-Dur has the skills needed for this task.
->Bao-Dur dispose des compétences nécessaires pour cette tâche.

902MAL/deadassassin.dlg
[Judging from the number and depth of the blaster burns, these Sith appear to have been recently killed by fire from a heavy repeater rifle.]
->[A en juger par le nombre et la profondeur des brûlures, ces Sith semblent avoir été tués récemment par un fusil lourd à répétition]




Journal:
You have stopped production of the HK-50 model. The factory terminal should allow you to shut down the factory.
->Vous avez arrêté la production d’unités HK-50. Le terminal de l’usine devrait vous permettre de fermer celle-ci.

You have stopped production of the HK-50 model.
With the HK-50s offline, you can now start mass production of the HK-51 model.
->Vous avez arrêté la production d’unités HK-50.
Cet arrêt vous permet de débuter la production de masse d’unités HK-51.

You removed your behavior core from the HK-51s.
->Vous avez supprimé le centre de comportement des unités HK-51.

Unwilling or unable to discover the name of the great Gand warrior you decided to lie in order to claim your reward instead.
->Réticent ou incapable de découvrir le nom du grand guerrier Gand, vous avez préféré mentir et réclamer votre récompense.

298/hk50shot.dlg
Statement: Assassination protocols activated.
->Déclaration: Protocoles d’assassinat activés.

298/reactort.dlg
If you could find a way to erase this from your memory, you would be able to bypass this restriction.
->Si vous pouviez trouver comment effacer cela de votre mémoire, vous pourriez contourner cette restriction.

298/datapadhkcore.uti
Core Upload Console
->Console de mise à jour du centre de comportement

This portable console can be used to upload modified behavior cores into some HK models.
->Cette console portable peut être utilisée pour charger les centres de comportement modifiés dans certaines unités HK.

This particular console is designed to work with only generation 51 HK units.
->Cette console spéciale est prévue pour fonctionner uniquement avec la 51ème génération d’unités HK.

298/hk50corein.dlg
[Shutting down the factory is impossible with the HK-50 core installed.]
-> [La fermeture de l’usine sera impossible tant que le centre de comportement HK-50 sera installé.]

[Remove the core and shut down the factory. Assimilation is not an option.]
-> [Supprimez le centre de comportement et fermez l’usine. L’assimilation n’est pas une option.]

298/hk50term.dlg
DELETING...
BEHAVIOR CORE TEMPLATE
REMOVED
->SUPPRESSION EN COURS…
MODELE DU CENTRE DE COMPORTEMENT
SUPPRESSION TERMINEE

TERMINATING PRODUCTION WILL
DISABLE ANY FURTHER STATION COMMANDS
->ARRETER LA PRODUCTION DESACTIVERA TOUTE COMMANDE DISTANTE DE LA STATION

CONTINUE?
->CONTINUER?


Continue.
->Continuer.


NO PRIMARY PRODUCTION LINE FOUND
->LIGNE DE PRODUCTION PRINCIPALE NON DETECTEE

MODEL PRODUCTION:
HK-51
STATUS: ACTIVE
->PRODUCTION DU MODELE:
HK-51
STATUT: ACTIVE

ALL UNITS ONLINE
->TOUTES LES UNITES SONT CONNECTEES


NO PRIMARY PRODUCTION LINE FOUND
->LIGNE DE PRODUCTION PRINCIPALE NON DETECTEE

NO BACKUP PRODUCTION LINE FOUND
->LIGNE DE PRODUCTION DE SECOURS NON DETECTEE



299/hk51corein.dlg
[Shutting down the factory is impossible with your behavior core in the HK-51s.]
-> [La fermeture de l’usine sera impossible tant que les HK-51 disposeront de votre centre de comportement]

[However, it might be beneficial to mass produce this highly effective HK model.]
-> [Cependant, il peut être avantageux de produire en masse cette très efficace unité HK.]

299/hk51term.dlg
Remove HK-47 behavior core template.
->Supprimez le modèle de centre de comportement HK-47.

The HK-51 behavior cores cannot be modified once units are active.
->Le centre de comportement des unités HK-51 ne peut plus être modifié une fois celles-ci actives.

HK-51 SCHEMATICS:
COMBAT UPGRADES
BEHAVIOR CORE TEMPLATE
->PLANS HK-51:
AMELIORATIONS AU COMBAT
MODELE DU CENTRE DE COMPORTEMENT


ERROR:
UNABLE TO LINK WITH UNITS
->ERREUR:
LIAISON AVEC LES UNITES IMPOSSIBLE

ACCESSING...
BEHAVIOR CORE TEMPLATE
REMOVED FROM ALL UNITS
->ACCES EN COURS…
MODELE DU CENTRE DE COMPORTEMENT
SUPPRIME SUR TOUTES LES UNITES

299/sec_term.dlg
To shut down the factory, you must first terminate the active production lines for each active droid model.
->Pour fermer l’usine, vous devez d’abord arrêter les lignes actives de production de chaque unité droïde.

Each production line must be shut down manually from its manufacturing terminal.
->Chaque ligne de production doit être arrêtée manuellement depuis son propre terminal.

In addition, when the primary line is shut down, any secondary line units will be activated automatically.
->De plus, si la ligne principale est arrêtée, la ligne de secours sera automatiquement activée.

Commission HK-51 backup production.
->Commande de la production de secours d’unités HK-51

PUSHING SECONDARY LINE INTO PRODUCTION
->ACTIVATION DE LA LIGNE DE SECOURS

PRODUCTION CANNOT BE STARTED
PRIMARY PRODUCTION LINE STILL ACTIVE
DEACTIVATE TO CONTINUE
->LA PRODUCTION N’A PU DÉMARRER
LA LIGNE PRINCIPALE EST TOUJOURS ACTIVE
ARRETEZ-LA POUR CONTINUER

299/sec_terminal.utp
Factory Terminal
->Terminal de l’Usine

#15 Leoneros

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Posted 05 April 2012 - 10:15 PM

Good job with the translation RevanStar11, but I would have translated those differently =/

103PER/drocon.dlg
Access Log 253-14: Sonic Imprint Sensor Update
->Accès au Journal (not completely sure) 253-14: Mise à jour du Capteur Sonique


"Accès au Log 253-14: Mise à jour du Capteur Sonique"
Indeed the word Log may not be French in origin, but many people still use it, especially when working in IT


You have stopped production of the HK-50 model.
With the HK-50s offline, you can now start mass production of the HK-51 model.
->Vous avez arrêté la production d’unités HK-50.
Cet arrêt vous permet de débuter la production de masse d’unités HK-51.

The first line is good, but for the second I would have gone with "Ceci vous permet de débuter la production de masse d’unités HK-51." to avoid repetitions.

You removed your behavior core from the HK-51s.
->Vous avez supprimé le centre de comportement des unités HK-51.

If i understand completly the original text, your are removing your own core from those units, so you need to make it apparent in French that the core is, in fact, yours.
"Vous avez retiré votre centre comportemental des unités HK-51"

298/hk50corein.dlg
[Shutting down the factory is impossible with the HK-50 core installed.]
-> [La fermeture de l’usine sera impossible tant que le centre de comportement HK-50 sera installé.]

Little confusion of times here. Past tense is incorrect.
"L'usine ne peut être désactivée tant que le centre comportemental des HK-50 est installé."

I also assumed that the core that was mentionned was still the same behavior core. If not, then this translation should be more accurate :
"L'usine ne peut être désactivée tant que le coeur des HK-50 est installé."

298/hk50term.dlg
DELETING...
BEHAVIOR CORE TEMPLATE
REMOVED
->SUPPRESSION EN COURS…
MODELE DU CENTRE DE COMPORTEMENT
SUPPRIME

TERMINATING PRODUCTION WILL
DISABLE ANY FURTHER STATION COMMANDS
->ARRETER LA PRODUCTION DESACTIVERA TOUTE COMMANDE ULTERIEURE A LA STATION

Little confusion in the translation for those two statements, i already modified the quote to avoid rewriting the entire text.

299/hk51corein.dlg
[Shutting down the factory is impossible with your behavior core in the HK-51s.]
-> [La fermeture de l’usine sera impossible tant que les HK-51 disposeront de votre centre de comportement]

Wrong use of past tense again, should be : [La fermeture de l’usine est impossible tant que les HK-51 disposent de votre centre de comportement]

[However, it might be beneficial to mass produce this highly effective HK model.]
-> [Cependant, il peut être avantageux de produire en masse cette très efficace unité HK.]

Little mixup in the order of words up here, should be : [Cependant, il peut être avantageux de produire en masse cette unité HK très efficace.]

299/sec_term.dlg
To shut down the factory, you must first terminate the active production lines for each active droid model.
->Pour fermer l’usine, vous devez d’abord arrêter les lignes actives de production de chaque unité droïde.

"Pour fermer l’usine, vous devez d’abord arrêter les lignes actives de production de chaque type actif de droïde." is closer to the original line.

In addition, when the primary line is shut down, any secondary line units will be activated automatically.
->De plus, si la ligne principale est arrêtée, la ligne de secours sera automatiquement activée.

"De plus, si la ligne principale est arrêtée, toutes les lignes de secours seront automatiquement activées." is better since it is implied that they may be more than one secondary line.

#16 Cair

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Posted 06 April 2012 - 09:55 AM

I practically disagree with all the remarks made by Cair, whom I thank anyway for thinking the translation was well done.

In the specifics, I took freedom of translating "core" non-literally in most cases while twice have I decided to propose a literal translation. This was because the italian equivalent using a literal translation would not make any real sense except for in those two particular lines.

I guess it's up to a third party to decide whether or not Cair's corrections are... needed. I stand by my original translation in every respect.

I've only remarked the incoherency between you're translation and that of the original game (wich is the one supposed to be used). Regarding the sonic imprint sensor I'm pretty sure that the italian translation calls it "sonora", but I could be wrong. As for the assassination protocols, apart for the fact that the italian translation says "Protocolli di assassinio", "Protocolli PER assassinio" it's incorrect in italian.

As for "core," it's a logical consistency: core and code have nothing to do with each other, in english as in italian. HK-47 is uploading or downloading his core - intended as a heart, not a code. In every other statement made by HK-47 when he talks about his core he's not talking about a code, even if you intend it as program: for example, how may a code glow?
Besides, even the french translation, as you can see, translate it as core.

P.S. ok I've controlled in the game. Is definitely "Sonora"

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Posted 06 April 2012 - 01:19 PM

Of course things are different if we speak of the original translation.

Sorry for not having understood it earlier. I never played the italian version so I had translated without any lead.

I'll agree with everything Cair suggested in this case then.

P.S. I remain firm in my opinion that "nucleo comportamentale" is a meaningless translation but I won't insist on this matter

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Posted 06 April 2012 - 03:16 PM

Of course things are different if we speak of the original translation.

Sorry for not having understood it earlier. I never played the italian version so I had translated without any lead.

I'll agree with everything Cair suggested in this case then.

P.S. I remain firm in my opinion that "nucleo comportamentale" is a meaningless translation but I won't insist on this matter


Well, speaking of the italian translation, I do believe that it's horribly done! As HK would say, It's a translation butchery. However, we must work with what we have. :P

P.S.
Are You italian?

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Posted 06 April 2012 - 03:26 PM

Also, a note to all non-English player - if you played a game with non-English TSLRCM, yet you found English text anywhere in the game, now is the best time to talk about it. I know some lines were left untranslated; Spanish version had English Kaevee's dialog for example - it's one of issues fixed for 1.8. So, yeah... we are trying to give you best experience possible, no matter what language you speak.


Kaevee dialog is missing even in the italian version.

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Posted 06 April 2012 - 06:07 PM

Kaevee dialog is missing even in the italian version.

Thanks for letting me know... I'll PM you about that ;)

Anyway, thanks for translation and corrections everyone! Good job.
I'll leave this thread sticky for now, in case someone has something to add.




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